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binnie

I LOVED THIS MOVIE! I saw it a screening last week, having heard none of the buzz, and haven't stopped raving about it since. SO good.

E.C. Henry

Jason Reitman :-)

This post 8-)

This post responder ==|:-)

- E.C. Henry from Bonney Lake, WA

Rhonda

cant wait to see this, nicely writter....

Maestro

Counterpoint re: 9/11 and the power of a good story--there was a TV series pilot about a man who was presumed killed in the Twin Towers who turns up in the present with no memory of the intervening years.

I would've liked to have seen that show. But I also get why it didn't get picked up.

ezwriter

Just read the script... 45 minutes. A real page turner. Fun. Includes every no-no ever pointed out in UCLA classes. Typos or dumb spelling mistakes, We see, Author intrusion, Songs, Character "feelings" not seen on screen, Italics, Bold, over use of Capitalization,etc. Goes to prove, it's the STORY that counts.

mernitman

Binnie: Clearly you have excellent taste.

EC: ;->

Rhonda: You'll enjoy.

Maestro: Now that more time has passed, maybe it'll get picked up...

Ezwriter: Story is king, and awfully-executed scripts get sold all the time. Just goes to show you, yes, but another truism is - Directors who write drafts (and know they can get the movie set up) play by a different rulebook than pre-pro spec writers.

Annie

Up In the Air is a proficient script for sure. Question (SPOILER ALERT): What do you think of Alex being married with kids? Why did Reitman choose to negate the relationship and all of its build up this way? Why couldn't Ryan have showed up and her apartment be a mirror image to his? Then you could have a montage of them creating a space together or each grounding each other with new places (and in the end they could have broken up anyway). Why was it so important that he not have found home with her? Is it that she is a "starter" or spark for him, rather than the real thing? And if so, did anyone else feel really let down and mislead by the chemistry build up prior to the reveal (which I never found that surprising, actually). Thanks!

Diane Drake

Wow! Thanks for making me conscious about this latest expertise. It is overwhelming.

mernitman

Annie: I think of the movie as being about compartmentalization - Alex was a kind of mirror image of Ryan's disconnected way of living. He's up in the air! And precisely because he's not grounded in any tangible, connect-able reality (until he begins to discover those connections, as a consequence of falling in love with her), that's where she can disconnect from her life, and meet him there (she couldn't meet him on the ground).
Etc.

Diane: As I've enjoyed your work, thank you for reading me!

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